Heh, for some reason the 'mah ship' line seemed to make me think of Toy Story where Buzz first see his cardboard ship in ruins and panics like mad. Yes that was random.
Expected the yellow bot to make more of a snappy remark, guess he isn't much of the sarcastic type. This is probably old but his glasses remind me a bit of Kamina from Tengen Guren (I think that's what it's called)...did you get that idea from there? Really loving the rich colors of the bots, not enough emerald green bots I say.
I had a slight suggestion you can do for this page but will just keep my mouth shut unless it's asked.
Yellow bot? YOu mean Prowl? As for his sunglasses, well, the main artist said he was inspired by a franchise called ABC Warriors, not Gurren Lagaan. Er, you do know none of these character designs are my own creation, right and that includes the sunglasses.
Suggest away. I'm pretty sure I told you in the e-mail that you say what you want if you want. All up to you. I won't likely change anything in this page because it's already colored (unless it's a grammar/spelling issue), but I will take it into heart for other future pages.
lol, sorry not familiar with the series but yea, Prowl. Ahhh and thanks for the clarification on the designs. I figured they weren't totally yours but that you just added your own touch here or there.
As for the suggestion, super minor actually. I was just a bit confused on the panel where the green bot (I suck) was turning his head and noticed his poor ship. I was just thinking maybe if there was like maybe a few lines over his head or an exclaimation point to denote shock or surprise, it'd be helpful, IMHO.
If you need to familiarize with the show I based this fancomic on, all the info you could need is here: [link] I actually recommend it because I do rely on a lot of references and whatnot from the canonical show. It's not that this comic probably can't be followed without being familiar, but the more you know about the show, the better.